You had me with the the opening horn section . I loved the story you told in the lyric. Vocal singing great. Did you like specific instrumental parts-Chorus melody I enjoyed the horns in this song. 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening notes draw you in and make you want to hear more? Yes 3) Is my melody interesting? Yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my music stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes
Not really a r&b song it sounds more like a blues song. Lyrics subject matter was not very interesting, the beat was pretty good, recorded really well
The instrumental part was good
The instrumentation was awesome! It was a retro blues/funk combination! The story is always what gets me! I loved the story! Actually parts of the song reminded me a little bit of "The Wiz". One of my fav movies from way back in the day with Michael Jackson and Diana Ross. Great job